tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-510707636208336657.post8515503859153246182..comments2023-12-14T05:18:46.234-06:00Comments on Tom Kepler Writing: "A Murmuration of Dragons," Maybe the 6th BeginningTom Keplerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11213713830938688817noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-510707636208336657.post-54975668678388025502015-12-27T22:50:59.340-06:002015-12-27T22:50:59.340-06:00Good point, and I'll certainly consider that a...Good point, and I'll certainly consider that after I get through the story and begin revising again. I want his past polished but not eradicated. Thank you. Tom Keplerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11213713830938688817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-510707636208336657.post-61314561946409731172015-12-27T22:39:08.768-06:002015-12-27T22:39:08.768-06:00Do you have a good reason for him using words like...Do you have a good reason for him using words like "adjure"? I would think that especially for a street rat, reformed or otherwise, that would be unlikely. Simplicity often has its own reward, but I like the detail of things like the height of Jin's roof. That comparison rings truer for me. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Carol G.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com